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Critical Analysis #1

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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27

Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-10-28 12:32 PM

and so we are begining,
and hope to ascend
Jacob's latter strung,
with callousness we rend.
And the war of the mind, cold and grey,
running forth from a river, meant for us,
a pale steed rising, fleeing from the day....
....and the stable yard ar full of lies
and truths yet untold.
and for all who want to cry, tell them.
and those against one who tries, fight them
and for those who attempt to, help them
for all who come, shall not fall
but for those that run, he is waiting.
The scyth is swinging, cutting like a knife.
Souls are bleeding
crying in vain-Belov'ed not found
changed within, alls lost again.
The pain begins.
The pagans cry not alone
for the song sings to the soul,
and the soul spekas to all....
The dance remains the same,
only the dancers change.
The forest is burning and we are the flame
who knows why we are so
...but forever we will..
of this we know...

Edward A. Beerman
11-96

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

1 posted 1999-10-29 10:00 PM

The only reason I read you post is because it had zero by it. I know that if no one lives a post you'll never know if anyone even read what you wrote. I was surpized at the subject matter and was moved. It is so much what the bible says about burning the crop and sorting out the weeds. Heavy stuff. What really happens in our minds and beliefs. Thank you for shareing.

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