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My Friend.. My Angel

caykay
Junior Member

since 1999-10-25

Posts 19
IL

0 posted 1999-10-25 11:37 AM

Kindness is the essence of our souls, which reflect upon others.
Each of us holds dear to our hearts, the warmth and tenderness of pure amour.
Never ending, always revolving, speaking ever so softly to our souls.
Doves perched on Angel wings, cherishing the beauty that lay before them.
Angels among us, Angels on Earth, our protectors, our guardians.
Levitate to the heights of your soul, seek out your destination and you will find it.

Believe in yourself, love yourself, embrace the passion that God has given you.
Remember the love you have my friend, it never left, it is within you.
Inspiration is the Genesis of a new beginning, a strength to behold.
To you my friend, my Falcon, you inspired me to find a new direction,
To see the beauty in life, and to unfold my wings and soar among the Angels.
Outwardly you shine as brilliantly as the Sun at first mornings light.
Never forget your Angels, for they truly love you and are among you... forever.

starchild
Member

since 1999-10-22

Posts 59
manchester, england

1 posted 1999-10-25 11:52 AM

you sound like you want to say a lot.
your words are enchanting.
you don't write like most of the others here, i like that.
i like what you write.
i also like doner kebabs but that is irrelevant.
write some more

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-10-25 09:01 PM

This almost reads as prose rather than poetry. I struggle to find the form in it at all. It has some wise advice included in it, but as a poem needs much work.

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