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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Forgive the forgotten for unworthy words Whose verses remain unrehearsed to this day Whose inspirited spirits evoked no applause Forgive them and live and believe in your way Remember outnumbered who stood for a cause Not destined to stand, they defended tomorrow They followed a hollow belief in their course Remember and live and honor their sorrow ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Master....this poem speaks volumes in so few words. It's one that needs to be read through several times. The meter and rhyme are intact and the message a good one. I cant analize this because I truly believe you've done a wonderful job with this one. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I'll have to disagree with you about this one, I don't think it's that good. (I never thought that I would be criticizing my own work)This time I didn't have a clear image of what the poem was going to be about. And I just went with the flow, I'm not really sure that I like where it brought me. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Laughing, well, that's a new one, I critique you and you argue, I praise you and you argue...is there no pleasing you  |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
LOL~ I never argue with your critiques, it's just that you're always right and I have a natural urge to defend my work. About this one, well I just don't think it's any good! |
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