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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
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And the waves crashed over The maidens sweet lips Her great hair of yellow smelling of sweet Tulips His chisseled complection Of rocks and of trees Typical Hero in Blue and green Standing on high sweet maiden he sees Down from the mountain Great Hero he came Lieing on beach sweet maiden remained The birds flying above And the fish swim below And a sweet maidens innocence Is begining to show ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Poor title i think Maybe "Real Fairy Tale" ------------------ Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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