havenot quite decided this title

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havenot quite decided this title

suze
New Member

since 1999-10-07

Posts 2
durban, South Africa

0 posted 1999-10-11 05:09 AM

Rainbow colours of past and present
envelope the complexity of being.
Foreign shapes, smells and openings.
Why?

So many different sounds and feelings
Show me
What does it all mean?
Push Push
another Push

Pull me into your arms.
Sometimes so much sorrow I feel
in you.

Hold me.
Fill me with your knowledge
Let me take away your pain
Let me show you
again
the beginning.

I need you as much as you need me.
I love you completlly.

You are my source
my everything
My mother.

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

1 posted 1999-10-12 11:23 AM

well, am not sure what you are trying to say here, possibly a poem about birth and the relationship with your mother, but I think your meanings are either too complex or too hidden, if you would like to explain a bit about the poem, I would like to discuss it with you

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