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lizzyluv Junior Member
since 2001-12-27
Posts 46nh, usa. we suck. |
aright, i need to ask that the moderators stop left-crunching my lines, as it makes them illegible or confusing in most cases. i am not oaky w/my poetry being tampered w/. soil no longer makes any sense, and i cannot edit it. this is annoying and frustrating to me. i know nearly eveything i've posted has had to be censored (grar), but it makes no sense to me that my lines are being messed, w/as well. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This poem has been removed by a Passion's Administrator. Lizzy you cannot continue to post poetry with profanity. This is a family forum, and you have been contacted on this issue before. Please review the guidelines a final time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ is i see [edited by moderator] on this one, i'm gonna cry. "everyone is broken by something they love and worship"- Francesca Lia Block *lizzy* |
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punksmurf Junior Member
since 2002-01-01
Posts 37new hampshire, U.S. |
tehe, what fun, let's blow down x-mas completely!, you know you like the gifts, though, this poem is fun, in that it is completely truthful about how you feel towards x-mas, and many must agree, that this poem should revolutionalize many peep's thoughts on the matter. say hi to lester! (sea too) |
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lizzyluv Junior Member
since 2001-12-27
Posts 46nh, usa. we suck. |
grar, you're a monkey. this one's uncensored as yet..... so i hate christmas. so? but is it really too much to ask to never, ever, ever, ever hear the chipmunks again? i didn't think so. "everyone is broken by something they love and worship"- Francesca Lia Block |
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punksmurf Junior Member
since 2002-01-01
Posts 37new hampshire, U.S. |
"she would say the same thing if you asked her, 'i love you baby, but that, i cannot do'" -arlington road |
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