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Critical Analysis #1

Forest of Illusions

Gypsy
Junior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 20
VA Coast

0 posted 2001-06-22 02:12 AM

Here in this forest, she listens to the darkness
Her fear has been building and she can see it
in the tall branches that disguise
the daylight high above.

Inside this tiny fortress, she dreams...
past the ivy groves covering these towers
She has been believing in climbing its thick walls-
yet the maze outside silences what she envisions.

Her path has been changing and growing
with the thickness
that clings to the dropping midst
Deep and penetrating,
she has witnessed a transformation
With only the moon's reflection,
She trembles to her destination.

Afraid yet determined,
she cuts thorns and weeds from her steps;
An opening in the distance,
beats deeply within her heart
running to catch every breath...

Yet as she stretches her arms-
into the lasting light,
she awakens;
confused
to find herself
trapped
and simply dreaming...
of her lost heaven.

To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson