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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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So this is the place where I can try to get a critique on my poem Well, I'll give you one of mine soon after I've done my work at home I'm just trying to write in English for my native language is Dutch So you all please will be gentle and don't critique me too much I enjoy reading your answers to the poems submitted here And I fear a bit for mine now must try hard, oh dear, oh dear So look out within a fourthnight have to think of a subject still thus it might be a bit longer but I'll sure write you one, I will A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-03-2001).] |
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Joricho Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 56Australia |
Good for you! Looking forward to what you have to share with us. JO |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Are you kidding? This is already better than a lot of what native speakers write. I wonder, at times, if the very fact that you have to concentrate more on the words, it doesn't give you a slight advantage in writing more interesting poetry. On the next one, though, don't forget the concrete image. Brad |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you Joricho for reading, you'll have to just wait and see. Brad, thanks for your kind words, but what exactly do you mean by 'don't forget the concrete image'? Well, maybe I will find out in time. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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