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The Journey |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Memories tumbled with time Emotions intertwined Where yesterdays abound Lost love forever found Curving, tangled days Younger, carefree ways So many paths to choose And where to leave these blues That they could not be found Nor turn my head around Walking thru the haze My heart my soul ablaze Softened thru the years Remembering - bitter tears Accepting my own path Thru joy, hope or wrath Older - head is bowed Learning life out loud |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I liked this! I have no critique to give! It's good..it flows, it rhymes, it makes sense to me!  |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
This is what I call easy reading. And I like it. [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 07-18-99).] |
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