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YeshuJah Malikk Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 263 |
greedy heads tout bliss so-called tryn-a sell it at the mall ware sales fail to deliver the tiniest sliver of hope then call canabis dope drowned it in piss pour reviews routinely twist it in knots not scientific not substantiated not corroborated and absolutely not founded upon truths hideous brutes at the gates of middle schools get caught in the pickle of searching for killer I days bought and paid for by taxpayers hand me them trickle down plans and trickle dung stance the beans are askance forget the hows and whys of routinely putrid lies fronted as his story told by him to the children of sin done in at a time when salvation is back in churches inhabited by deal monsters Go a head and an a lies this. |
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Kurt Rhys Junior Member
since 2001-05-08
Posts 23 |
Ah, Rap, is it now, and, big surprise, angry Rap! How original! Don't believe it when they tell you that less is more. After all, why change a proven formula. |
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Marq Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 222 |
I like the style. It's intelligent and well-thought out -- bold and creative. I think if you switched to a more lyrical approach it might be even better. I enjoyed it. Well worth the read! |
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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
This does have a rap-like flow, I think. I am pretty busy with finals, so I just wanted to drop in and say that I hope "Analyze this" isn't the title, because all I could think about was Robert Dinero crying. Anyway, maybe, I'll critique later in more detai. Disclaimer: The preceding statement is just my opinion. |
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