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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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My family sleeps in the night, While I stand guard, A soldier in battle, I am reminded of today. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 04-22-2001).] |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Although you misspelled soldier (unless that was intended), I thought this was an interesting piece. Nice parallel with the child and the soldier. I also liked the interplay with time. Thanks, Brad |
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Tony Di Bart Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 160Toronto, Canada |
XEONOX ANOTHER 4 LINE WONDER TO PONDER TO SAY IN SILENCE REVERBERATE IN YOUR EYES WHILE SIPPING CHERRY COLA I LOVE THEM ALL, DEPTH NEED NOT BE DEEP. WORDS AGAINST OTHER WORDS ACT ALWAYS IN SYNERGY. THE CHOICE OF WORDS DETERMINES THE MAGNITUDE OF AWAKENING. THANKS AGAIN |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
i like this, but i do have one question whose answer will add greatly to my understanding of the poem: when you say you are reminded, do you mean of A battle, or that you remind yourself of a soldier, or that you are reminded of today as it is a special occasion. i like the brevity in this poem, but just for my simple mind, i need a little more added on for understanding. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
All of your interpetations are correct roxane. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Kirk T Walker Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 357Liberty, MO |
Nice, yet somewhat ambiguous. (A breif response to a breif poem.) Note: I mispelled "breif" just so brad could point it out. ha ha |
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