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The Bra/The Jockstrap
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The Bra/The Jockstrap |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A word of explanation: This was posted on another site and was written as a challenge. I was given the phrase "from the purse, her bra spoke to me" to put into a poem. This is the poem. Then a discussion grew about the difficulty of wearing a bra. The second poem here was a result of that...hope you like them: From The Purse, Her Bra Spoke to Me Disheveled she took a seat across from me on the train her eyes wild and frightened brow wrinkled as though in pain. Two holes emblazoned her stockings like warrior decorations a lacy slip showed slightly though forgotten in her preparations On second glance I saw her breast peaking from the imitation fur from the purse her bra spoke to me something terrible happened to her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Jockstrap Cradled softly against your manly groin I support your precious jewels I never stretch or snap or bind for I guard your masculine tools. No pulling or tugging on these straps the design is for comfort you see no latex, spandex or cotton twill nothing but soft ecstasy. So run, young man, fling yourself about be secure that you won’t be hurt Each day you where your jock strap be glad it’s not a skirt!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
First time reading these. Hilarious. ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I saw tragedy in the 'Purse' however the 'jock strap' inspired me; I'm going to have a mamogram please come along with me. Rejoyce that they're not squeezing you and offer sympathy. Then when I exit from the room please note I didn't holler. Just take me to a shopping mall my bra size now is smaller. I like humor in poetry. Loved the Jock Strap [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 07-18-99).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I've had that 'hamburger press' device clamped to my appendages too many times! I loved your poem...I like humor in poetry! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I hate the smell of passing gas, But, at times, not to explode I need to ease the pressure til I find a good commode. That's why, each morning when I dress, Before I don my clothes, My jock strap goes on backwards And then no one ever knows! As always, deVine one, you inspire me. |
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