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sylphid
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since 2001-01-23
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0 posted 2001-03-07 03:11 PM

I just hit this wall, then the second
Hit the roof and fall down,
in recognition
Your body ..
cries and moans
Your eyes …
Blink
in verification of pain
It’s a beginning…
Your heart recoil
in joy ,
in admitting
That it’s merely your soul
that really denies
the want to love
and its only your body that still go on living


[This message has been edited by sylphid (edited 03-07-2001).]
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