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deb Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 44Reading, Pa., USA |
Adler worked to overcome death Freud strived to comprehend death Jung was just intrigued by death But I know death I say death is true existence Death is not an insoluble part of existence There is no need for theoretical explainations of its reason Nor is there a need for an intellectual apprehension Life is merely an interuption of death |
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M'Hal Junior Member
since 2001-01-04
Posts 15 |
deb- I enjoyed the read, I know this is posted in critical analysis, but I haven't anything critical or analytical to say about it. It was a fresh perspective on a subject that visits my mind frequently. I usually feel like a poem without a title is like a picture without a frame, (sorry about the cliche')but I think it adds a nice touch to your particular peice. M'Hal |
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mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
"life is merely and interuption of death" Huh? do you mean we were dead before we were alive just to end up dead again? If so, I find it hard to relate. The logic seems flawed somehow. Is it possible to see death as a continuation from one reality to another? other than my slight confusion over the picture you're trying to paint, i dig the poem,deb. coherently quick and to the point! |
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Marq Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 222 |
I like your last line, but the rest of it just seems like disjointed talking out loud to me. Sorry! |
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