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Critical Analysis #1

A Sweet Melody

jonmcm
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since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

0 posted 2000-10-18 06:41 PM

We like to dance the nights away
To music that makes the heaviest heart gay.
The rhythm that comes to us seduces,
Such is the fruit this cadence produces.

Blinded in this melodious trance,
You and I aroused still dance.
Our bodies swaying to the alluring beat,
Our hearts, our lips, and our eyes do meet.

Allied with this music the climax builds,
All heightened senses to the forefront filled.
Love is kindled in this time we’re sharing,
Our bodies, our minds, and spirits are yearning.

As notes do build to the planned crescendo,
Our passion aligned, to fulfilment does end so.
For the songwriters full intent is clear
For us to make love to his music here.

[This message has been edited by jonmcm (edited 10-20-2000).]

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