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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Lelly Shae Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32 |
I love your poem...it actually inspired me to write one just now..(it's in progress as I write this) Anyway,I really like this kind of poetry. You don't see much of it anymore. Now its all that free-verse,abstract stuff that's awfully ponderous to read. I mean,you can be absract and stuff,that's cool,but rhyming makes it read easy...and yours reads easy and is really cool. Ignore my teen-age slacker speak...imagine,a poet and can't think of more "artistic" words. ------------------ "Time flies like an arrow,fruit flies like an arrow"--Groucho Marx (ha ha) |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
There is only about 3 poems that I have that do not rhyme. I personally enjoy rhyming poetry better, they do flow easier and they sound nicer to me. I have more poetry in the Open Poetry #2 Forum if you are interested in reading any of it =u) Are you going to post this poem that you are workign on? If so I will look forward to reading it! |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I think that your poem was wonderful. It was a very good insperation. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Thank you! |
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Lelly Shae Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32 |
I will,but I'm not exactly done yet. It will be up today.  ------------------ "Time flies like an arrow,fruit flies like an arrow"--Groucho Marx (ha ha) |
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