Enjambment (2nd part re-written)

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Enjambment (2nd part re-written)

Janie
Member

since 2000-08-13

Posts 158

0 posted 2000-09-10 02:10 AM

Sweat runs; rolls
down my
neck; divides my
breasts.
Tension
travels up my
leg; creates
temptation.
Impatience
unleashes
desire as I
wait for
it.
Then,
it’s my
turn;
my heart
begins to
race.
Temptation
turns to
meet desire.
As I
get the
signal,
I can already
feel the sweet
caress of a
teasing start.
Then,
immense relief
surges across
my body
as wind madly
rushes in
and I
drive through
the light.

rojogrande
Junior Member

since 2000-04-10

Posts 29
Fullerton, CA, USA

1 posted 2000-09-11 11:43 PM

Great poem. Abstract and powerful. I love the fact that your title fits well with what you are doing. I first learned of it in spanish as encabagalmiento, and fell in love with the style. A poet after my own heart.

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