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Whisper In The Wind
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Whisper In The Wind |
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Andrea New Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 2Dorset, UK |
WHISPER IN THE WIND Whisper in the wind I call to you my love. For all the trouble and problems here They’re minor in our hearts. I walk by the sea Thinking of your strength Stangers we once were But now we are two in one. One, two, three and four Problems seem forever more But deep in our hearts We know the truth. Truth knows lies Lies know truth I wander around inside your heart And find what I am looking for. Ignore the hurt Ignore the pain It sometimes seems I’m distant Just remember the whispers. Whisper in the wind I call to you my love. For all the trouble and problems here They’re minor in our hearts. "Stop searching for something that can never be found." |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Hi Andrea, And wlecome to CA, I see this is your first post. I'm running out of time right now (and I'm not much good at free verse anyway) so I won't try to say anything of substance new. But, I'll try to get back later. Thanks, Pete |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Welcome to CA. I don't want to get to specific until I kind of know what you want from us or if the type of thing we do here is really what you're looking for. Could drop us a hint? The first thing I noticed is that you need to be more specific in your images - What are the problems? Why are they minor? Who is this person? Who are both of them? As a reader, this is what makes poetry more interesting for me. Just an opinion, Brad |
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