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Jounney Agent
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since 2000-08-01
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0 posted 2000-08-01 11:08 PM




I dedicate this poem to those plus sized women bubbling with positive self esteem.

BIG BLACK GULS

Big Black Guls
captivate a disgusted
and disgusting little white couple
seated in side Dennys
wolfing down a plate of the
Egg Sandwich Salad
smothered in Ranch dressing.

Curiously they watch
in sheer entertainment at...

BARUFA, da big gul,
Voluptuous,fullfigured and LOUD
with her short trimmed blond florescent hair
as bright as her personality.

Oh, and the otha big sistas!
You know!
MONIQUA and SHAY-SHAY
as they smile cute dimples
within their round features.

To the greedy little couple,
the BIG BLACK GULS
are quite intriguing.

To me they are beautiful
because they are proud.

They are proud
because they are black,
and no matter what
da otha folks
say or think,
they shoal lubb
who they  ILZ...

LOUD,
   Sassy,
      Bubbley,
                BIG,
                   Bouncy
                       and Lubbley

BIG BLACK GULS



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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2000-08-02 10:49 AM


there sure is something about those full figured ladies that mesmerize

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Jounney Agent
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since 2000-08-01
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2 posted 2000-08-03 03:17 AM


Baraka Pegasus! (Meaning Blessings to you)

Big Black Guls is an observational piece about full sized African-American women. Hollywood depicted them as Mammies,those admirable yet unattractively rough,strong,stern women who loyaly worked fo' Miss Ann. From my perspective I see them as confident women with unique beauty,style and culture.From the hairstyles to the ebonics,I truly admire those BIG BLACK GULS.

Thanks for your response.


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