Critical Analysis #1 |
Conglomeration |
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Conglomeration Frenzied ants travel quickly and return A frozen lighter at the speed of light. In two thousand years Conestoga learn Frenzied ants travel quickly and return. Even Pythagoras law could not spurn Poems viewed from three angles to ignite. Frenzied ants travel quickly and return A frozen lighter at the speed of light. Bob <>< |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Well done Bob. It would appear that you have captured the essence of all the triolets all of us have posted so far. Quite an accomplishment. Although I'm not sure it makes a lot of sense, it does fit the format and flows pretty well. Hey guys, look, we have another convert Pete |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Just wanted to say a quick thanks. I was reading this and said, "hey, that's my . . . that's Jim's ... that's Pete's" Nothing quite like a surprise like that. Brad |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
All I can say (I'm sorry) is...I loved it!!!! Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Elilas Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 20The Dalles, Oregon, USA |
Wow i have no idea what you are relly tring to say but I liked it! Steven |
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