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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2000-07-26 02:46 AM


Conglomeration

Frenzied ants travel quickly and return
A frozen lighter at the speed of light.

In two thousand years Conestoga learn
Frenzied ants travel quickly and return.

Even Pythagoras law could not spurn
Poems viewed from three angles to ignite.

Frenzied ants travel quickly and return
A frozen lighter at the speed of light.

Bob <><

© Copyright 2000 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA
1 posted 2000-07-26 09:55 AM


Well done Bob. It would appear that you have captured the essence of all the triolets all of us have posted so far. Quite an accomplishment. Although I'm not sure it makes a lot of sense, it does fit the format and flows pretty well.

Hey guys, look, we have another convert    

Pete

Brad
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea
2 posted 2000-07-31 01:49 AM


Just wanted to say a quick thanks. I was reading this and said, "hey, that's my . . . that's Jim's ... that's Pete's"

Nothing quite like a surprise like that.

Brad

warmhrt
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since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563

3 posted 2000-07-31 08:27 PM


All I can say (I'm sorry) is...I loved it!!!!

Kris

the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare



Elilas
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since 2000-03-15
Posts 20
The Dalles, Oregon, USA
4 posted 2000-08-01 01:05 PM


Wow i have no idea what you are relly tring to say but I liked it!

                                   Steven

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