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A sound of love?

SunShine913

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since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-20 01:50 PM

I heard a sound today, my friend,Such a sound I heardLike angels singing in my heartLike children playing in the park Like babbling streams through misty dark'Twas such a sound I heardI heard a sound today, my friend,Such a sound I heardLike cry I heard from my first bornLike bluebirds call in early mornLike velvet silence before a storm'Twas such a sound I heardI heard a sound today, my friend,Such a sound I heardThat sound I heard... it was my ChoiceNow I'm in love with your sweet voice...Forgive me!

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This was done of the top of my head please forgive ..

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since 1999-12-21

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Southern Abstentia

1 posted 2001-08-20 01:58 PM

you're a maverick.. I like that..

the almost prosaic format delivers this one..

and the melding of words works too.. the top of your head is a good place

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