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SunShine913
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0 posted 2001-08-20 01:50 PM



I heard a sound today, my friend,Such a sound I heardLike angels singing in my heartLike children playing in the park Like babbling streams through misty dark'Twas such a sound I heardI heard a sound today, my friend,Such a sound I heardLike cry I heard from my first bornLike bluebirds call in early mornLike velvet silence before a storm'Twas such a sound I heardI heard a sound today, my friend,Such a sound I heardThat sound I heard... it was my ChoiceNow I'm in love with your sweet voice...Forgive me!    

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This was done of the top of my head please forgive ..

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

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1 posted 2001-08-20 01:58 PM


you're a maverick.. I like that..

the almost prosaic format delivers this one..

and the melding of words works too.. the top of your head is a good place

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