Critical Analysis #1 |
Diver's Release |
Robin Junior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 48Cardiff, Wales, UK |
Diver’s Release Robin Laffan Music, beer, confusion, smoke the meat of the lads at heart in the night where energy burns wild and furious releasing the patience of the day. A dark night Freedom to be And the world is so far away Melancholy slips through the street of the party a welcome guest in a stranger’s house as each turns inwards to see the visitor. The music’s tone is downbeat and slow, a gentle guitar weeping sea-salt tears in the rhythm required to watch a lone fish for a solitary hour, barely breathing in the amniotic blue while hovering over a garden of coral. “Play something ****ing cheerful!” And the party is reborn in the star lit night with the boat gently rocking to the caress of the waves and the shifting balance of unsteady feet. Stumbling, falling, joking, living. Then once more, a pause in the water when the clear glass of the Red Sea’s surface reflects upon more than the sky They live so! So full! So well! So carefree! [This message has been edited by Robin (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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naynay Junior Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 13whitewright tx usa |
it sounded very good the words was so so oh i cant even think of how to tell you what it done to me it was good and i liked it well |
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