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Sharon's Rose
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sharon's Rose Planted in lush pastures of Sharon, Evidenced from above is a rose... And He laughed with exuberant joy When her fertile life Shiloh chose. Ascending from rich soils of Sharon, Its existence she has to impart... For blooming free in salvation's grasp Is a rose rooted deep in her heart. Growing wild in the plains of Sharon, Forevermore a rose will revive... The fragrant beauty of her Shepherd's call, "Behold, My fields are alive!" -Robert E. Michaud Jr.- |
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Forrest Cain Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306Chas.,W.V. USA |
Lighthousebob what a great name. Surely better than outhousebob(just trying to make you laugh) Enjoyed your poem and the flow not exactly sure what you meant, but I`m from W.V. and that`s to be expected. Maybe it`s because I love the beauty of flowers.I`m flower poor. I have about three hundred varieties. Mostly daylilies but also several roses. I got a great one this summer called Knock Out. Ten times better than any of my others. Ole yea at some point enlighten this country boy on this well crafted poem. Also beware of any critiques from Eldridge Jackson he is worse/funnier than me. And keep an eye out for the princess Elyse. God knows I love her but she`ll slice you and dice you and have you for lunch. Really Elyse I`m only kidding because your so much fun. Now don`t get me started on those brownies. All kidding aside this is awonderful place where the feedback is open, honest and very condusive to growth. You write and I`ll read your friend forrest |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Bob (ROFLMAO @ Forrest), Very nice piece of work you have penned here. I love the play on "rose of sharon" (I have three or four of them); or am I just plain stupid, and they are also called "sharon's rose"? Good writing, Bob, Kris the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Forrest: Thank you for the compliment. (I think.) I live in the flower prosperous San Joaquin Valley where even the weeds have flowers. And thanks for the tip... I'll keep an eye out for those heartless critics that you mentioned. Warm Heart: You figured out my play on words! But, Sharon (capitalized) is a fertiley rich tract of land located between the mountains and the Mediteraranean Sea and Jesus grew up there. Bob <>< (Forrest: This is a picture of a Big Mouth Bass.) Just Kidding! |
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mysticharm Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 189Canada |
Hi Lighthousebob, we have a lighthousejill (well she thinks she is, when it rains she stands down by the wharf with a flashlight in her mouth)  Ok now down to business, you wanna hear what I think of your poem and not about jill, I like your poem very much. That's it!!! LOL Never underestimate the Power of Purpose. Yesterday is history. Tomorrow is a mystery. Today is a gift. That's why it's called the 'Present' unkn |
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eldridgejackson Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 91 |
Forrest is right when he says he loves flowers. He has many beautiful flowers in his garden. I enjoyed your poem so much I decided to go look at my garden and write a poem about one of my flowers. I call it "Crabgrass Party" Thanks for the lovely poem. PS if you have any rain can you send it out to Georgia. EJ aka JEC aka Forrests brother. |
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