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Angel`Fox
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since 2000-05-20
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Ottawa, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-06-16 05:52 PM



Heaven

Heaven is so close to my reach
I want to go to its warmness
I want to be wrap up so tight
In it's loving embrace
I feel it way down deep inside
This is were I belong
Heaven is where I want to be
My soul aches to be there
My heart tells me no lies
My body wants to intertwine with it
As I curl up in the darkness
All I think of is heaven
I feel it calling me from a far
Saying, come to me my sweet
I am waiting for you
I want to be with you too
Come fly with me to the stars
It will be a treat for you and I
Come my love come with me
Leave your fears behind
And come to heaven in my arms…

Angel`Fox
1:02pm
June 16, 2000


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"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"



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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-06-21 09:43 AM


You have some good lines here, but sometimes they contradict...
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