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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Heaven Heaven is so close to my reach I want to go to its warmness I want to be wrap up so tight In it's loving embrace I feel it way down deep inside This is were I belong Heaven is where I want to be My soul aches to be there My heart tells me no lies My body wants to intertwine with it As I curl up in the darkness All I think of is heaven I feel it calling me from a far Saying, come to me my sweet I am waiting for you I want to be with you too Come fly with me to the stars It will be a treat for you and I Come my love come with me Leave your fears behind And come to heaven in my arms… Angel`Fox 1:02pm June 16, 2000 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You have some good lines here, but sometimes they contradict... |
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