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Change in the Forums!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2000-06-10 09:17 PM

Very soon we will move
To new software on this forum
And when we do, I caution you
To act with much decorum

Screaming loudly, ranting and wailing
Will not make the process go quicker
So settle back and find some comfort
(please! No pills nor really hard liquor!)

A few hours is all that Ron will need
To transform our Passionate place
And when he’s done, I wish I could see
The smiles on everyone’s face!

We’ll let you know when the Wiz
Is ready to begin
But for now settle back and read
Remember! Multiple posting is a sin!

*I have taken the liberty to post this in all the forums (thus the reference to multiple postings!).

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-06-12 02:31 PM

PoetdeVine~

The rhyme and meter are fine.
The subject matter is critiqueable.
To be without Passion's for two hours,
is totally unthinkable !

Why, I'd rather take a trip
to the outskirts of hell,
than be without my Passionate poetry
that I love so well.

If Ronnie just insists,
I'll try to get over my blues.
I think I'll just try sleeping
until the whole thing's fit to use !

Thanks for all your help
Little Ms. PoetdeVine
I'm convinced that when it's finished
We'll all like it just fine.

Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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