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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
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0 posted 2000-06-06 11:58 AM


I remember
the end as it was
the place
another lost cause

I remember the pain
The strife that hurt
an end in sight
is an end unwanted

I remember the face
and the beauty it spoke
i see the words
in my life the joke

How i cry
Now i remember
how I shattered
when you no longer spoke

 "Mother is the word for god on the hearts and lips of children everywhere" Brandon Lee THE CROW

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
patricianne
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since 2000-05-04
Posts 66

1 posted 2000-06-06 06:52 PM


This poem demanded to be read and reread!!  It's so sad, is it based on a real event?
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