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Critical Analysis #1

Can't Stop...

Joshua Garrett
Junior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 21

0 posted 2000-06-06 03:28 AM

He is sitting on a seat,
Sitting by his computer,
He can't stop thinking of you,
He can't stop loving you,

And he can't just stop...
And put this black pen down...
And stop writting this to you.
"I love you forever and always"

- Joshua Garrett

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-06-07 02:09 AM

Nice , short, and beautiful poem. It really captures the reality of love.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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