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Joshua Garrett
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 21
0 posted 2000-06-06 03:23 AM

I have this candle of dreams,
I light it at night to help me dream of you,
I always dream of cheating,
And dreams of lies.

Now I don't light this candle,
And my dreams of you are of love,
And dreams of life.

Is this really a candle of dreams,
Or of nightmares?

- Joshua Garrett
© Copyright 2000 Joshua Garrett - All Rights Reserved
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-06-06 06:46 AM

Hey, I like this. An evil candle, definately!
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