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Critical Analysis #1
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rainbow_sunflower
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2000-06-02 08:33 PM

Burst the tears,
Challenge your feelings
Are you confused again?

Cry aloud,
Scream death,
ARe you depressed again?

Hit your child,
Beat your wufe,
Are you a freak again?

Break the lamp,
HUrt others
HAve you gone crazy again?

Feel the love,
Feel the pain,
Did you cut yourself again?

thanks for reading.
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