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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa 
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Her eyes, pierce into my soul. Seeking out my inner self. Her eyes, penetrate the deepest depths. Chasing away the shadows in my heart. Her eyes, give me peace in a place where only confusion reigns. Her eyes, sooth my troubled mind and body. Making me wish I was one with her. Her eyes, I could stare into them forever. Her eyes, someone please come discover the world in her eyes. |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Great poem about true love. |
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jenni Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 478Washington D.C. |
epoet-- i think this piece has a few too many cliches to really say anything. (ok, way too many.) what are you really trying to get across here? i liked the repetition, though. jenni |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
ok then, I was trying to get across the fact that when I look into my wifes' eyes, I get completely lost and swept up in her world. P. J. Kotrch |
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