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Takunda
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0 posted 2000-05-12 05:02 PM


Lost Boyz

You will find them watching you underneath black woodies, Pulled over rolls of braided hair. They love like quiet storms, Their smiles make brief appearances and the women who love keep their secrets tucked deeply behind whispers between kisses.

By Mr. Chinks



 

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KF
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1 posted 2000-05-12 11:29 PM


i really like this. i like the choppiness of it...it adds to the feeling of incompleteness. the piece seems quite secretive. if i understand correctly, it brilliantly expresses the nature of men and women. men, who cannot seem to show emotion, and women, who love but dare not speak. the dilemna of loving and being vulnerable and naked to hiding, being safe, and being numb. well, at least that is how i understood it. great piece!

KF

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