I have a feeling u won't like this one !

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I have a feeling u won't like this one !

[BABE]
Junior Member

since 2000-05-05

Posts 11

0 posted 2000-05-09 12:03 PM

Again this is not strictly a poem.  I don't think the replies to this will be very good as it was mainly written for "my eyes only"
Oh well see what you think.
I shall always learn from it
Thank you.

You can search for love and happiness all your life not knowing that
true love was the one thing you threw away.
When do you know that what you have is true love ?  You don't.
There will always be "someone else"
That "someone else" can make you see that the love you had was only
lust. But if you believe in your love you will ignore these feelings and
make your love something very special.
If your faith isn't strong enough then you will loose that love searching
from something that isn't there.  It slips away through your fingers.
You don't notice until it's too late.
At last you are free to find your real love.  You find it and realise it is
nothing, only a dream you can never be a part of.
You convince yourself that what you did was for the best.  But you
know deep down that all you are left with is confusion and a broken
heart.
You took the decision you can't ask for that love back.
So now your stuck in between the truth and the lie you have been
living for so long it is hard to imagine life without it.  What do you say
to people?
Do you continue with the lie, the easy way out ?  Or do you face the
world in the real light and let people discover the truth ?
The lie made you so happy that when you think back you smile inside.
Although the truth makes you sad.
What if the lie comes back ? Will you re-live that happiness again ?
Will you see through it realising that only way out is with a broken
heart ?  You will be back where you started.  Is it worth it for that
one moment of happiness ?  Only you can decide, no one else.
Facing reality, the truth maybe the hardest thing you have to do, but if
it's what you want surely it is worth it ?
Don't let people decide for you because it makes them happy.  You can
make your life happy, if only you chose the right road.

amazon_lover
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland

1 posted 2000-05-09 03:38 PM

Hi BABE!
Time and again you speak of something that reaches my thoughts deeply.
Do not let other people decide for you. Thats very true atleast in my friendship. I should have been the one to decide whether its appropriate. As you told it was a late realization but life goes on and I'm unsure whether alteast I can be a good friend to her.Thanks for the read.
Sincerely
A_L

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