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Grace Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 19 |
Gladys and Frank what a pair They had so much love to share They held on tight their love was strong,like the magic and beauty in an Irish song They had a large family this is true,so there was always plenty for her to do She always found time for a little fun,to show her love for everyone A woman of wonder with a passion for life,an amazing mother,friend and wife Her children are blessed by her love each day,no matter how near or far away This lady's our mother she gave us life Yes! Gladys was Franks darling wife It's been some thirty years since Frank passed on and still our family shares a special bond So Mom from your family,grand and greatgrandchildren too We hope all of your dreams have come true!! M.G.M. 5/99 < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Grace (edited 06-06-2000).] |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
You've got a strong rhythm to this piece but I wonder if you might want to clean it up ever so slightly in certain parts. You've sacrificed some grammatical clarity here (although punctuation might clear that up). Nevertheless, it reads quite well. This was cute. Brad |
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