"All gone now"

Standing outside this winters night
I remember you
the words that we said
the smiles that we shared
in that never-ending summer

all gone now, all gone now
fade into the night
consumed by the dark
all gone now
wave goodbye and say goodnight

I wrap the cold around me
it freezes my tears
half-fallen half-formed
the dark swallows up my sorrow
swallows up my past
swallows up my soul

all gone now, all gone now
drift into the dark
no coming back
all gone now
wave goodbye and say goodnight

sunlit dreams and happy times
eaten by the black-eyed beast
that preys on the night
he's taken my heart
he's taken my soul
he's taking my life

all gone now, all gone now
I slip into the night
never coming back
all gone now
wave goodbye and say goodnight

-Dante


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