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zorkon65 Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 27 |
I wrote straight out never changed anything about it that is in a way how we want love to be never changeing always good always the way WE rember it was What is love by charlie herring A look A laugh A touch A smell A person I know A toss of her hair A smile A thought I don't know Will I ever Can I ever Find true love Or am I destined to search To look But never know True love thanks for the pointing out the typos (i dislike windows spell check right now) but i guess pobodys nerfect [This message has been edited by zorkon65 (edited 04-23-2000).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Nice poem, this line however has a couple of typo's in it (Or am I destiand to searh) "destined to search". |
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