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Critical Analysis #1
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Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48
0 posted 2000-04-22 02:19 PM


  Her eyes are deep and bright,
like a star in the night.
  Her smile can turn any frown
into a merry smile.
  Her beauty uncomparable in life.
  I am so very grateful for her being
in my life.
© Copyright 2000 Kurly - All Rights Reserved
Forrest Cain
Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA
1 posted 2000-04-22 05:06 PM

I`ll bet this is about your girlfriend or
maybe you mother. Nice to read you poem.
Keep writing.
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