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Critical Analysis #1
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Sexy teasing music
Hoarse shrieks
Throat hurts

Deep husky manly voice
Red warm palms
Stinging feel

Funky smooth dance moves
Hands moving up in the air
Like leaves swaying to the breeze

Luminous light bars in choreographed movements
My hands bare
Regrets
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