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A Spring Incident |
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heng New Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 5 |
Golden rays warm the land Cool gusts brush against rosy cheeks Sparrows and mynahs sing merrily Soft wind chimes charm in the distance Yet masked faces walk briskly away Their heads bowed to the ground Huddled under umbrellas and The New Paper i'm writing a poetry book for children(age group 10-14)and this is one of my efforts...do u think this is a commendable attempt?don't hestitate to criticize though  ")BTW,will u care to venture why "masked faces walked briskly away"? ") |
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