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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA 
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Eccentric AH Electric AH Valenci AH but Sweet AH |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Transmigration Of The Translation Before JBouder Asks The Nation eccentrica=eccentric stuff electrica=electric stuff valencia=juicy stuff but sweeter=but sweeter stuff enough stuff? Damn=I hope so What/Who's Eccentrica? Click it and find out [This message has been edited by haze (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Well, we all have our favorites (some of you already know who my other favorite is). If you don't have a favorite yet, find one!!! Haze, don't suppose you can hang out a bit? By the way, I hated this one (I checked the link -- you know!) Brad |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Brad Brad Brad I would really be concerned if you liked this (it would give a whole new layer of meaning to the movie "Body Snatchers")So-I'm glad you hated it. TA-nice to see ya' |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
What an electrically eccentric slice of tangerine tango ms. Haze... the simplicity of this funderful opus is erotically complex and layered in honey... nice...  |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
 I knew you'd get it-thanks LR! |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
not once but twice-what is this cgi script coming to? [This message has been edited by haze (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
H~ I live in Valencia. (I guess that's what makes me so sweet) I liked the knife in the pear. I noticed another Pennsylvania connection though. What is this, Passions in Pennsylvania Poetry? bboog |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Haze: Well, I suppose that I'm with Brad on this one. I, personally, did not like this as much other poems you've written. One question: "Transmigration Of The Translation Before JBouder Asks The Nation" What is this all about? HMMMPHHHH!!! Taking a shot at my analytic side, huh?  Welcome back, Haze. Jim P.S. You left out "Metalic AH". |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Hey Jim- It was the boldest brashest way to come back Sometimes Ya' Just Gotta'...ya' know ROFL-Yep "Transmigration Of The Translation Before JBouder Asks The Nation" just a thinly disguised "hello" to the anal-ytical side of your brain... Regarding Metallic AH I have also been informed I usurped Erotic AH among the many other Ah's that escaped my mutilation...actually-I had just penned the first two prose pieces (in 20 years) and needed to unwind the language-take my liberties and abuse my license...I think I did it well...ROFL so Eccentric AH Electric AH Erotic AH of Valenci AH like Metallic AH but so much Sweet AH [This message has been edited by haze (edited 03-21-2000).] |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Imagine what the world would be like with out the "anal-ytical" types.  I like the second version better, btw. Nice to have you back.Jim |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
JB-without the analytical, I suppose I would remain untaxed and begin to believe I was living in Monaco *ooo* now there is a thought! BRB (maybe) |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
ROFL@haze... Intoxic AH! |
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haze Senior Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 528Bethlehem, PA USA |
Intoxic Ah is bleeding Bett AH when you're Eccentric AH Electric AH toying with Erotic AH on the streets of Valenci AH and glittering in Metallic AH but AH so much Hot AH and by fah Sweet AH lost in bed with your lov AH head spinning intoxic AH |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Emphatic Ah Delectic Ah... you AH gurl... |
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