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Shez
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since 2000-03-15
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0 posted 2000-03-15 09:06 AM



this is just a short poem for someone special whom
i met here online...since then things have changed
i want him to know that i really love him a lot!!


I was alone feeling low, ignorant about love
In time i met you, observed your each move
               felt your every touch
You helped me find true love, I was awake now
                but still dreaming,
Though i havent seen your eyes,never felt ur
                    l.....i....p......s
I got a picture of you in my mind so clear n real
         You are that special man in my life
with whom i fought,argued,got hurt,felt love
                 and above all learned about life
I cherish every meeting with you,every word of urs
                pleases my ears....!
I wish i could fly like you n cross all bars n be near
               I pray to that this fantasy of mine
takes turn into reality soon,coz its only u i desire
              And need you in my life
For all the unspoken words my ears heard,
          they say only one thing
that u Love me too more than i love you
           Be a part of all my dreams
Make me fulfill my wishes,hold me when i fall
           Trust me when i say..
Believe every word that comes from my heart
             Come to me when you feel lonely
For all the moments we shared i thank you
             Need to say just three words
                      I LOVE YOU

^*^Shez^*^


 

© Copyright 2000 Shez - All Rights Reserved
Diana B
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since 2000-03-10
Posts 97

1 posted 2000-03-15 11:40 PM


Online relationships...so hard to understand and so hard to let go of...embellished by our own minds in myriad directions...been there done that and know too, like all things this to shall pass...
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