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Yeah...yeah...yeah!
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Yeah...yeah...yeah! |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Yeah...yeah...yeah! You say what you want........ Yeah...yeah...yeah Heard it ALL before Doesn't bear any weight to my soul You go on and on about the things you like to say And things you think I like to hear Yeah....yeah ....yeah.... Heard it ALL before Don't care to hear your talk Or believe your lies And even spend the time to fantisize! Yeah.....yeah.....yeah Heard it ALL before My ears are calloused to your voice My heart hardened to your tone No open place left Yeah......yeah...... yeah Heard it ALL before Time to listen to something else! |
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J.L. Humphres Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 201Alabama |
Illusion, This one seems as if it might be a really appealing idea; the format however ruined it for me. It just read kinda choppy to me. But I really did like the concept. Thanks for the read. J.L.H.< !signature--> After going back for a re-read I do catch the rhythym, it's kinda bop-sody. To be read aloud. Okay sorry about that. J. Jason I...I have seen the best minds of my generation... --Allen Ginsberg [This message has been edited by J.L. Humphres (edited 02-16-2000).] |
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