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WHO IS SHE?This poem goes out to someone special..!
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WHO IS SHE?This poem goes out to someone special..! |
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since 2000-01-31
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Who is she? As she wakes up in the morning to find a haunted reality staring back, Robbed and ripped apart by her own reflection, A friend in disguise , a foe she slept with , Blood spurting on those betraying , scattered pieces … Like a never ending lava of sorrow, Her emotions and feelings so broke , so lonely , so raw and yet so old, And so she leaves, looking for maybe herself or someone who could be her, Walking along those cruel roads , those hidden tracks, She is wounded and hurt , mocked and laughed upon, Who is she? A question she asks as millions of fates stumble across her path, Each stabbing her with a silent knife , Raping her brain and the hope that lives, No one to answer , no one to care , As her cry touches each corner of the world, Those guiding her through the dark night , turn away as the sun comes up , Those who love her when the tide was high , turn away as the sea softly dies, Who is she? As she lies In bed with that ugly lie, Making hate and hopelessness , the only remains of her shattered soul, Laughing a hollow empty laugh , letting herself be pushed and touched, Crossing each limit that guards her sanity, As she pulls out each hungry eye which comes her way, Loving the feel of that dirty blood bathing her insides, Murdering hr short lived dignity , her so called conscience , As she gets high and lost her destination stolen, Dancing a soft desperate dance of death, Stranded somewhere b/w heaven and hell, Who is she? She asks one last time! As she jumps out of that cornered window , Daring HER fate , challenging her destiny , she hopes maybe she could fly like a bird and escape, With her open twisted skull , her white blood giving away each secret which she so skillfully hid, Finally telling , letting the world know who she is , but to late to know it her self , She gives her eyes away to her waiting grave!sf |
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