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My so-called Best Friends |
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roxy8365 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 27e.falmouth MA usa |
We were so close, Told each other everything. No secrets, no lies. Just a friendship that never dies. Almost everyday we were together. Doing what we normally do, girl stuff. Until one day, it came down. A bomb that blew our friendship up. I can't believe it happened. I wish it never did. We were Best friends. Until then. They said I was a follower. And said I had no friends. They left me all alone. My so-called best friends. |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
You are a very depressing person Meghan. You need to start writing about happier things. If you can't do that then you need to start living a happier life. Move away froom the past. Forget the guys that you have dated and ones you know you can't have, for reasons such as THEY ALREADY HAVE GIRLFRIENDS, and move on. You are a big girl and you can find a great guy who will love you for you. |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
You are a very depressing person Meghan. You need to start writing about happier things. If you can't do that then you need to start living a happier life. Move away froom the past. Forget the guys that you have dated and ones you know you can't have, for reasons such as THEY ALREADY HAVE GIRLFRIENDS, and move on. You are a big girl and you can find a great guy who will love you for you. |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
You are a very depressing person Meghan. You need to start writing about happier things. If you can't do that then you need to start living a happier life. Move away froom the past. Forget the guys that you have dated and ones you know you can't have, for reasons such as THEY ALREADY HAVE GIRLFRIENDS, and move on. You are a big girl and you can find a great guy who will love you for you. |
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roxy8365 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 27e.falmouth MA usa |
Thanks for replying to my poem. i know my poems are depressing, but i am living a happier life.its just that the past has been hard for me. now i'm recovering. how did you know my name?thanks again. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Megan, I'm glad to see that you posted this poem in this forum - You've written some pretty good stuff this summer... and ....if you check the profile on "Cutie" you'll find them likely to be from one of my two summer school classes....Good Luck in the fall, keep writing, and definitely keep SMILING...  ------------------ Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done: For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits, Than I am sure I have in my whole five. ~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75 |
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roxy8365 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 27e.falmouth MA usa |
i dont know how to look for the profile. i tried, but i dont know how to get to it.thanks ms. ness for replying to my poem.i hope you have a good rest of the summer. and i hope your visit went well!!! [This message has been edited by roxy8365 (edited 08-11-99).] |
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PartiStarks Junior Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 38Brooklyn, NY |
Hey, Roxy. I read your poem & I see where you are going with this. I am sorry that this has occured. Just out of curiosity, may I ask how old are you? ------------------ |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Meghan, I know your name from a friend of mine. And no I did not go to summer session Nan. I do live in Falmouth though. Anyways I'm glad things are better for you Meghan. Cutie  |
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roxy8365 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 27e.falmouth MA usa |
Then who are you, cutie? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yeah - Who are you then???? I wanna know too.... ------------------ Nay, if our wits run the Wild-Goose chase, I am done: For thou hast more of the Wild-Goose in one of thy wits, Than I am sure I have in my whole five. ~ ²1592 Wm. Shakespeare ~ Romeo & Juliet ~ ii. iv. 75 |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Neither of you know me. I have a friend that was in your summer school class. I don't think the two of you were friends. But she showed me "passions in poetry" so I have been reading and writing some of my own. That is how I know you. Cutie |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
So Cutie..... You think I don't know most kids in this town??? Don't be assuming...  |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Well I don't go to school in Falmouth so I am pretty sure you do not know me. Sorry! Cutie |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
No matter - You're welcome here, anyway - At least it isn't raining now....  |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Thanks Nan....and sorry for the confusion Meghan! Cutie |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Thanks Nan....and sorry for the confusion Meghan! Cutie |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Thanks Nan....and sorry for the confusion Meghan! Cutie |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This poem is refreshing in its simplicity. It doesn't try to be introspective and complicated, and it doesn't need to. Well done. ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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roxy8365 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 27e.falmouth MA usa |
No problem, Cutie.But still, I probably know you, you dont have to tell me who you are, but i have a feeling who you are, or who youre friend is. Are you from Bourne?You don't have to tell me. Don't worry about it. But still, thank you for replying. *megan* |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Nope I'm not from Bourne but my friend is. And judging my the way you said that I am pretty sure you know who she is. From what I hear you two aren't very fond of each other for several reasons. Oh well. I guess that is in the past. She's a nice person, you just have to be on her good side. Well anyways gotta go! See ya Cutie |
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roxy8365 Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 27e.falmouth MA usa |
Yeah, I can figure out who your friend is. Actually, I have no problem with her at all. There were rumors going around about me saying stuff about her. Then I heard she hated me and wanted to fight me and all this other stuff. I didn't know why, because i never said anything bad about her, and it wasn't like i was going to go after her boyfriend.i'm not that dumb. Plus they are in love. I hope she still doesn't have a problem with me because i never had one with her. Well, I just wanted to clarify that.the one time i chilled with some people and her bf was there, all he talked about was how much he loved her and wonderful she was.and he described her to me.The only thing i EVER said about her was that she's not what I pictured.She was a lot prettier.but that got all twisted around into something bad. but its in that past. well, gotta go. *megan* |
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Cutie Junior Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 19Falmouth MA |
Well Megan...I think you might still might be a little confused as to whom I am friends with that went to summer school but it is no big deal. The last I heard was that Delia wasen't pissed off at you anyways. So good luck this year! Cutie |
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