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I See Only Darkness!!
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I See Only Darkness!! |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
It's a room drenched in light, But I see only darkness pieces of those broken stars falling down on me , Sharp till I can no more bleed, My blood licked away by the night that surrounds me , That glittery sky , a shimmering shaking night , its black cloak is stained with blood today, on the brink of collapse, Torn apart by those cruel summer rays Why do I see it all ? All that misery ..the silent dawn of the doom we have turned a blind eye to! They just stand and talk, ignorant, angst, Unhurt …..untouched….making me wonder endlessly, It's a room ….drenched in light and I m there with them all…, A peal of evil laughter tears its way through the thick moist air….a shallow comment passed, Breaking yet another heart….those pearly tears fall , wiped away ..Unnoticed, A harsh punishment for me for I prefer the darker side (it's a room drenched in light), A laugh maybe , a gentle touch form another world …from someone else, Not here ..not form them, But I sit..it's the rule of the world, Shifting form one place to another, Restless, impatient, wanting to escape, Music too it seems is soft and dreary, of love and a happy life, And where is all that , not inside those shallow waters on which we are afloat, All this and so much more drains away the little energy I have, I long for my own surroundings ,my own privacy, but I am chained , and weak , Constantly a loud deafening voice comes barging in….. Shattering away for the umpteenth time my carefully organized twisted little world, Faces get in to ma face, looking at me , I M an alien among them , let them see my scars Maybe those cracked bloody gashes on my face, that shout out for mercy(for myself ,for the world), will make them learn, It's a room drenched in light, Sweaty bodies collide , till I feel like retching , Only a touch away , physically, Yet a life time away , emotionally , Fingers pointing, accusingly, Tongues yapping , stupidly, Wanting to believe the worst , the dirty , the inhuman, Grabbing hold of words hanging in the air, words of their own interest, In a room drenched in light , I listen and nod , Smile and oblige, For it's the rule of the world, A foolish grin , a hidden sneer , plastered on my face , So when does it all end? Maybe now , maybe never , The clock ticking away , till I can feel my soul burning, Jumping at every opportunity to get away, Flirting my time away, My eyes drinking in the back of every head, For faces……I just cant stand , drooling with greed, so pathetic , I wait ..till the food is all gone, till the party is over, The tongues are locked for the day , The ears and mind loaded with garbage, All to be poured out the next day, to set ablaze another innocent heart , The curtains of dusk are drawn by now , I open up my eyes , for I didn't want to see , Cotton balls pulled out , who gives a heed? Good byes settle in and I slip away into the cold night , As the winter wind grabs hold of my hand, Guides me through, till I find solace , An evening wasted , that I regret, But yet again today I witnessed another drama … We humans so skillfully play , So I smile , and snuggle up inside my bed , Till sleep mingles up with scattered thoughts, to give birth to another dream and frees me!SF |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Faith -- your werk is darque and creamy !!! I wonder if you should be posting in Dark Passions??? It seems that is your audience dear!!  |
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