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Open Poetry #51

Trains

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2021-03-28 06:46 PM

Deeply, I love trains,
They’re taking you anywhere,
They play in the night of Ajaccio
As much as under the sun of Algiers
There are people in, who calm you down
There are girls eating here and there
Golden dates, and gods
Who pierce you with their eyes.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2021-03-28 07:58 PM

Wow! Great write, my friend. I could see, and feel it all . . .

jimmy

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2021-03-29 03:36 AM

thanks jwesley, this is a privilegiate comment for me,

yann

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

3 posted 2021-04-02 11:28 PM

Yann, You've turned the atmosphere
somehow mystical..& intriguing..
that is a special knack Poet.

Sky~

~Do You Know That Feeling
Of Just Wanting To Get Lost
In a Starry night~..

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2021-04-04 08:42 AM

thanks sky for the touching compliment,

yann

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2021-04-19 08:51 PM

Those eyes are even more piercing when the rest of the face isn't covered with a Covid mask...but still a beautiful sentiment and write. Just longing for the good old days when trains and relaxation, or excitement went hand in hand.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2021-04-22 10:49 AM

thanks michael, I hope it will be very soon, everywhere
yann

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