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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
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the bars are closed I am too sober the snow spits against my windshield the brittle woman in the passenger seat who spewed fleshy fantasies now sleeps like a drooling mannequin the dashboard clock is useless – it has never been this late and for the night to be this dark, two suns would have to set |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sober driving is a good thing...even if you notice all those little things that drive you mad. Great imagery. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Right you are, my friend. You should be drunk by now - at least feeling good, but, chagrin, you somehow missed the boat. You had me smiling, sympathetically, at the first line. Loved this - one of the best I've read by you. jimmy |
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