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Open Poetry #51

Fated

Elgordo
New Member

since 2021-07-29

Posts 7

0 posted 2021-08-13 09:38 AM

Foreasmuch as I find thy beutious self,
So ripe and Devine, Aphrodite to mine loins,
I'm cursed with neither the station, nor coins,
Alas I fear, our love is an unread tome,
No joyous union, no hearth nor home,

For I found fate a most fickle master,
Thing veiled twixt joy or disaster,
Much like the Ronin, I now walk alone,
In solumbistic silence, whilst I atone,
Bereft of joy, destiny, past and her...

In memento to her...

Divine Paradox
Junior Member

since 2021-08-03

Posts 44
I'm not from here.

1 posted 2021-08-16 07:02 PM

The Wanderer will have company. Interesting subject. I like this.

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

2 posted 2021-08-24 07:50 PM

Fate is always there to dictate; you have a nice rhythm to your verse. Welcome to Piptalk and keep writing

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2021-08-25 05:09 PM

this was lovely, bittersweet but lovely, and using the Samurai, was not only descriptive but drove the strength of those feelings home.
Well done

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