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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2021-07-19 04:46 PM



I need to drive, one or two hours a day,
To remember Monument Valley
To make vanish, ghosts of night,
To quit house of evil, incomprehensive me,
I need to drive, to breathe new hills,  
To hear the best music from "you’re the sky",
I need to drive to be a lucid man.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2021-07-30 08:49 PM


Yann,

Really like this one too! You took me there.
  ~L

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US
2 posted 2021-07-30 11:29 PM


Liked the sound of that.. "Lucid"


Sky~

'Excuse me.. while I kiss the sky'
J.H.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2021-07-31 02:07 AM


thanks lori, this is so true and friendly


yann



2islander2
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4 posted 2021-07-31 02:08 AM


thanks Sky, you made me smile, with the "Lucid"
yann

Divine Paradox
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since 2021-08-03
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I'm not from here.
5 posted 2021-08-16 07:07 PM


I totally feel this.

SG

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