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Open Poetry #51

you can save me

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2021-06-27 05:06 PM

You can save me
With a word or two,
With your red lips
Taming a lucid glass,
O Babe, in the dark,
You can save me,
With your imagination of rose,
With a red sweet dress,
Taming your pepper skin,
You can save me
With a naked word,
Just love you Honey.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

1 posted 2021-06-29 05:14 PM

Yann, Hope you have someone special to
dedicate this Poem to..it's very romantic, with a wonderful playfulness to it.

Enjoyed..

Sky~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2021-06-30 02:19 AM

Yes, Yann!
Very romantic!
“…taming a lucid glass”, nice line.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2021-06-30 08:13 AM

Thanks Sky, appreciated comment
yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2021-06-30 08:14 AM

thanks ebony, exquisite comment, i like romantic

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2021-08-13 11:44 AM

Very romantic. yann. Hope it's for a special lady.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2021-08-14 09:12 AM

yes Ida, for a special lady, not an imaginaire one, good to read you here

yann

Divine Paradox
Junior Member

since 2021-08-03

Posts 44
I'm not from here.

7 posted 2021-08-16 07:00 PM

aww.. very lovely

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