Open Poetry #51 |
Easy Heart (A song for Kaye) |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Easy Heart (A song for Kaye) An easy heart can be so easily broken torn so easily in two a heart filled with eagerness for love so innocent trusting and true so easily shattered for love drawn to every word, glance, touch and desire. your easy heart went impatient for a chance to begin to blossom like a precious desert rose. embracing arms held you warm, comforting and close and in the back of your mind an end to cold desert nights and your easy heart hurriedly moved to love your hearts’ passions so true reasons were right words between you were kind and seemed so real your easy heart gave everything to love your prayers seemingly answered from heaven above to your easy heart love is so easily given your easy heart could never know that in a short season it would be broken torn in pieces leaving your loving spirit silent and alone an easy heart can be easily broken in two so easily broken for love everything given nothing in return your easy heart gave way to love and it was gone in a season plans and dreams became a charade cutting your easy heart like a blade petal by petal your heart fell to the desert floor embracing cold nights and parched days a mirage of chameleon play your easy heart counting sins one by one and crying songs each night to heaven your living-love a regret but to an easy heart infinite love is impossible to forget after a season of rain and desert wind your easy heart came to change a beautifully glowing desert rose eager to share your forever love and blossom a new start when you find that someone special, who will faithfully love your easy heart… |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Once the charade starts it's near impossible to find your way back from it alone. I was happy to see a better ending than what I imagined was coming here. Love the beauty you see in this person's heart. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks for your very nice reply, Michael. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I remember when my heart was like this. I remember every subtle change into something less trusting, and now I hope for the ending you describe. Enjoyed! "I know this love will tear me to pieces |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Temptress, Thanks for reading and finding a parallel meaning for you. I appreciate your kindness, and glad you took the time to read and understand. JL |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
JL, You have captured the essence of heart in a young woman. So well done! I love the use of the desert rose blossom. Great,first poem of the day read! Thanks! ~L |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thank you,Lori. Your reply was very kind. Thanks!! (: |
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